Can someone please review this article

**weirdnessme** · 8 November, 2009, 11:01 AM

I have just started a new blog YOUCANHIDE , this article is my first on the blog can someone please review on the basis of SEO , writing?

What are Privacy Policies? | YouCanHide

**Aquarezz** · 8 November, 2009, 11:56 AM

It's a very good article, although wouldn't you say "What is a privacy policy" instead of "What is privacy policy"?

It's just a little thing I could think of

**rome9t9** · 8 November, 2009, 13:01 PM

Your theme reminds me of Kovich's blog

But I guess you are writing on a serious topic. So its better to have a theme with a formal serious look. Nico said it right about the privacy policy thing. Do not use the phrase "privacy policies"..name that article as "What is a privacy Policy? | YouCanHide"

**weirdnessme** · 8 November, 2009, 14:44 PM

Thanks alot for ur view i would change it , but can u help me find a good serious themes i tried but couldnt find a good one

Thanks Again

**rome9t9** · 8 November, 2009, 15:02 PM

These are the themes/theme owners whom I prefer.

hxxp://forums.digitalpoint.com/search.php?searchid=18628017

hxxp://wpspider.com

hxxp://web2feel.com/jinsona-themes/

**Kovich** · 8 November, 2009, 15:19 PM

Very nice theme. I love it. :P

I'll contribute the same advice as above - change your article title to 'What is a Privacy Policy?'
Always use Title Case in your titles as well: TitleCase

Those are some nice themes, Rome.

**weirdnessme** · 8 November, 2009, 16:36 PM

I changed it

Does the theme look that bad with my content .

How about this oneWordPress Wiki Theme Preview - ThemeForest

**Kovich** · 8 November, 2009, 16:46 PM

I don't think there's anything wrong with your theme.

I use the same one on my make money online blog, and people tell me I should switch - and I eventually will, but I still think the theme is beautiful.

**Jamie** · 9 November, 2009, 11:58 AM

I have a suggestion.
Why not provide few examples of a properly written "privacy policy". That would certainly help.

**Kovich** · 9 November, 2009, 12:03 PM

That's a great idea, Jamie!

If you give privacy policy examples, or even go so far as to create a privacy policy generator, you could get tons of exposure!