Thread: Is My New Post Good?

Hey, I just made a new post. Do you think it is better than my previous works? How can I improve it? Thanks!

Michael Jackson Can Make Us better Bloggers

I don't think it really adds much to your blog. I think by writing this article, most people will think that you are using it just to draw more traffic. I guess it is just me because I am tired of seeing articles being written about Michael Jackson because he died.

As for the language in the article, I thought it was good. But, I would still enjoy reading another article in your blog, since this one doesn't really interest me.

Originally Posted by Riccur

I don't think it really adds much to your blog. I think by writing this article, most people will think that you are using it just to draw more traffic. I guess it is just me because I am tired of seeing articles being written about Michael Jackson because he died.

As for the language in the article, I thought it was good. But, I would still enjoy reading another article in your blog, since this one doesn't really interest me.

Same. You don't have to write a blog post on it. And I hate to be harsh, but some of your comparisons were, well, cheesy. "glide into blogging supremecy." Kinda cheesy...

The structure is better, but the content just didn't draw me in.

Don't blog just for the heck of it. Blog only when you know you have something valuable to share.

Yea, I was just trying to produce a post with better structure and grammar than usual. It is kind of a link bait though.

@Corey Do you think my structure is better at least. (Yea, I guess some of them are kind of cheesy though

Originally Posted by theblurr

Yea, I was just trying to produce a post with better structure and grammar than usual. It is kind of a link bait though.

@Corey Do you think my structure is better at least. (Yea, I guess some of them are kind of cheesy though

Yes, there was a major improvement.

Another secret to better writing - find something you LOVE writing about and watch it write itself.

Originally Posted by Sneakyheathen

Yes, there was a major improvement.

Another secret to better writing - find something you LOVE writing about and watch it write itself.

Thanks a lot Corey! All thanks to you. I still have a long way to go though.

Yea, writing what you are passionate about is key.

Kinda of schmultzy and really topical - Too competitive