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    Affordable Native Writers Team- GUARANTEED to make you money

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    Hi there, Kelly.

    Since you're new to the community, would you consider writing a free article for me as a review copy? This would help establish you in the community because after I receive the article, I will post my full review and issue you iTrader. This process often results in additional sales. Please let me know if you're interested.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kovich View Post
    Hi there, Kelly.

    Since you're new to the community, would you consider writing a free article for me as a review copy? This would help establish you in the community because after I receive the article, I will post my full review and issue you iTrader. This process often results in additional sales. Please let me know if you're interested.
    Hello Kovich
    I have received your topic and I will send your article shortly..Thanks for giving me this opportunity..

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    Review copy received.

    First, I must say that this is clearly not done by a native English-speaking writer and I feel mislead. I gave Kelly the task of having an article written about how kids can make money. Now, the content is informative in the way that it does cover several methods and it includes a brief description of each, but let's look into this further...

    The bulk of the article is poorly written - until you get to one specific part that increases in quality quite a bit. This was very strange to me and I decided to investigate. The results follow:

    From the article I received:
    Babysitting is a new traditional job. The work is easy to do and many young people may use it as practice and as an opportunity to gain experience when they think of entering into the house and elderly care business. Baby-sitting is a job, less complicated than others are.

    Copy and paste that into Google and you find:
    Babysitting is a traditional teenager's job. The job is easy to do and many teenagers can also consider it as practice and a way of gaining experience if they intend to get into the house and elderly care business. Babysitting is a less complex job as compared to others, and if the teenager is lucky...

    I had the understanding this was a quality article writing service.
    Not a terrible rewriting service...

    Anyway, the first sentence of the content says it all:
    "Financial independency has its own goodness and one cannot compare the satisfaction a person derives from his job."

    This writer lied in her post.
    This writer delivered me half-stolen, poorly written content.

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    I am up for two more reviews..Is there anybody who can take risk after reading such a horrible review about my writing...

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    Hi,

    Sure I'll try a free review. PMing you the info now.

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    Review sent..Awaiting feedback..Thanks


    Quote Originally Posted by Sami4u View Post
    Hi,

    Sure I'll try a free review. PMing you the info now.

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    Hi,

    My Review:

    I must concur with Kovich.

    I asked for an article on How the Flamingo Las Vegas Started

    This is your opening line.

    Flamingo Las Vegas, the most enticing casino in the world, boasts of as colorful a history as its brilliantly lit pink façade. Proprietor of many alluring night clubs and Hollywood Reporter in Los Angles, Billy Wilkerson, wished to reconstruct the Sunset Strip casino in Las Vegas in 1945.
    Maybe that reads OK to some

    This one really get me. I have shopping lists shorter then this. Plus a real waste of words. Nothing to do with the topic of How the Flamingo Las Vegas Started. My guess you were trying to make sure you could supply 500 words, because of lack of research.

    Closing paragraph.

    Today, the famous Flamingo stands out in the competition of all mega-resorts with its beautiful wedding chapels, fine restaurants, soothing health spas, tempting shops, and popular celebrity shows and musicals. Not surprisingly, a number of celebrities have added to the charm of the casino throughout its history including Lena Horne, Foreigner, Bobby Darin, Gary Crosby, Pat Boone, Kenny Rogers and The First Edition, Rose Marie, Ella Fitzgerald, Betty Grable, Xavier Cugat with his band, Xavier Cugat, Paul Anka, Kaye Ballard, Nat King Cole, Alan King, Eddie Money, Tony Martin, Abbe Lane, Burl Ives, Darren Romeo, The Supremes, Juliet Prowse, Joe E. Lewis, Spike Jones, Eddie Jackson, Bill Coby, Frank Gorshin, Jimmy Durante, Steve Allen, Joan Rivers, Terry Moore, Vic Damone, Fats Domino, Milton Berle, Count Basie with his Orchestra, Phyllis Diller, Tom Jones, Larry Storch, Peggy Lee, Ray Bolger, , Mitzi Gaynor, Pearl Bailey, Vic Damone, Shelley Winters, Jack Carter and Barbara McNair, Wayne Newton, Danny Thomas, Peter Lind Hayes and Mary Healy, Milton Berle, Dick Shawn, Jerry Lewis and Dean Martin, Harry James, Justin Tranz, Don Ho, Della Reese, Jan Murray and Gloria De Haven, and Dionne Warwick.


    If I asked for 600 word article would I have gotten another 50 celebrity names?

    Very poorly written content.


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    I received another article from the OP. Let's take a look.
    It's much better than the original, but still lacking in a number of areas.

    These days, children have become quite demanding. They have endless demands and you go on working hard to meet their never-ending allowances and at the same time you want to teach them the true value of money. So, why not help your child learn some business skills that s/he can handle on his/her own and the practical knowledge of earning money will make them self sufficient as well.
    The fundamentals are there and it's a great opening to an article. However, I'm seeing many grammatical and punctuation mistakes. These results hold true throughout the entire piece of content... information is good, but grammar is horrible. Now, with this specific article, I'd say that it's worth buying... but definitely not at the price the OP is asking.

    I have had writers charge me $0.0065 a word and they provided me with better quality than this. So, my recommendation would be that the price of each article is lowered dramatically and that more effort is invested into writing and proofreading the content.

    For security purposes, I advise no up-front payments.
    If you're going to make a purchase, get the article first and review it, then pay.

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