I ask for a celebrity bio. Writing style is in need of some help. Look at this sentences.
She is married to a music executive Jordan Bratman and has one.
My first guess you are from England using words like "mum" and not mother. but after reading the fact that the article does not flow.
More like random sentences just put together. I am only guessing that you grabbed a line form a few different bios and ran them trough a word spinner or something.
Did the article pass CS YES.
But would I want a site of these articles NO.
Can the article be used YES. My thought would be on a link wheel for search engines not for people.
I will agree with Kovich the article is mediocre at best.