Hey guys! I had to write a personal statement for college admissions. It is supposed to make me look dedicated, efficient, resourceful, and motivation, and a willingness to work with others.

Please read it and let me know what you think! Remember to be 100% honest because this is a rough draft of the REAL essay that I'll submit.

http://www.writerseven.com/my-personal-statement-for-college-admissions/

Thank you so much!