Indeed a decent page, Will. But I'm sure it's not just about usage of some words or phrases but also the sentence structure. I'm not against Indian writers because some of them are really good, talented and full of creative ideas. But even after being an Indian, I must admit that many Indian writers don't have that flow. The sentences are complicated and compound as if they think in Hindi and translate the same to English. The sentences and the flow of content should be easy and fun-to-read. Many expert Indian writers with great command on English are out of this but most of the beginners do have this problem. Only this page won't help them. They need to follow some good copywriting blogs as well as tips and tricks by expert copywriters like John Carlton, Michel Fortin, Brian Keith Voile etc.
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