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    Quote Originally Posted by akira07 View Post
    Ok and to prevent statement which too much, can we use average instead to said $ amount directly?
    For example "I'm earn about $100-$500 per month using this method" ?
    That's a pretty bad idea if you ask me. You have to be precise if you want to convince people.

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    Why that method can convince people? It's because we don't want to look too much, because in the fact, we're not also get (for example) $500/month right? That must be a fluctuations, so instead to write $500, i think it's better to write $100-$500. Or maybe if the range is so far, we can make it become $300-$500. It's honest and still interesting

    Or do you want to tell people, the max amount you ever get?

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    Definately talk about the maximum amount you've earned. You need to remember not to lie, but you also want to present that you earn a lot from this method (if that's the aim of the product). By saying the maximum amount you've earned, you're still telling the truth, yet you're presenting that information in a way that will sell the product.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Simon View Post
    Definately talk about the maximum amount you've earned. You need to remember not to lie, but you also want to present that you earn a lot from this method (if that's the aim of the product). By saying the maximum amount you've earned, you're still telling the truth, yet you're presenting that information in a way that will sell the product.
    Therefore you don't need do write approximations, akira. People are not interested in your 100$ when they can make 400 more!

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    @nic SEO and Simon
    but for me (as a reader which often become vitim of e-book seller :P), i'm not see the approximation as a problem. I think it's OK to write approx but don't be stupid, to make it like this : BUY EASY MONEY METHOD WHICH EARN ME $50-$500 per month. I mean, even there is a flucuation of your earning, don't write a smallest amount you ever get. The range of approx should be considered.

    And don't you think, to write the max, people will think that the program is just can earn you that amount? (you write $500, so max earning is $500?). And from this opinion, i become thinking, how about making title on landing page like this :

    LEARN MY EASY MONEY METHOD
    WHICH WILL EARN YOU $500 or more..!!!
    JUST FOR WORK 1 OUR AT HOME

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    Quote Originally Posted by akira07 View Post
    @nic SEO and Simon
    but for me (as a reader which often become vitim of e-book seller :P), i'm not see the approximation as a problem. I think it's OK to write approx but don't be stupid, to make it like this : BUY EASY MONEY METHOD WHICH EARN ME $50-$500 per month. I mean, even there is a flucuation of your earning, don't write a smallest amount you ever get. The range of approx should be considered.

    And don't you think, to write the max, people will think that the program is just can earn you that amount? (you write $500, so max earning is $500?). And from this opinion, i become thinking, how about making title on landing page like this :

    LEARN MY EASY MONEY METHOD
    WHICH WILL EARN YOU $500 or more..!!!
    JUST FOR WORK 1 OUR AT HOME
    Don't you think someone has done it before?

    What do you want us to say? Okay, you don't care if there are approximations. Great.

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    @nic
    no, it's rarely to find landing page which using "or more" sentences. I'm trying to get real data about title on landing page, i just browse around to some e-book seller on my country. And i find, there is just a bit which said the fixed amount earned.

    Here's the list (i prefer to make it not live link for some purpose) :

    premandomain .com/ --> this is using your advice
    formulabisnis .com/index2.php --> using no amount written, but i know well this site. It's owned by joko susilo and it's sell well

    g-website .com/ --> i'm member here. Using fixed amount, but from the other. What he said is, learn the method that earn him teacher a $549,784. And i have a fact that this site only produce 400 sell. Why i know about this? I'm joined to him another site called rahasiasukses clickbank .com . And in the welcome page of member area, it's written that g-website produce 400 sell. If you wanna proof, i can screenshoot it.

    rahasiasuksesclickbank .com/index.php? --> no fixed amount written. Since this site is new, cannot give the performance information.

    suksesdariamazon .com/ --> Writing $5600 (fixed amount). But just for info, in habibie afsyah blog (owner of the site), he said that his earning is decreased? It's 2 probability : because sales letter is not interesting or maybe it's because amazon program is not interesting anymore.

    kayadariinternetmarketing .com --> suwandi chow, it's so popular even in other country, do you know him? He's get paid for a thousand dollar for sales letter he create. But, shocking fact..!! There is no fixed amount of earning written in KDIM site...So, even expert in copywriting not write amount earned. that's mean?

    So, you can make some conclusion after see it and read my explanation.

    Please guys, we're in discussion here, i'm not mean to make any war. We're discuss to get the best. And as long we have opinion about our statement, write it . And please respond it.

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    To remember that if someone goes to your landing page they are already half way sold. You know they are at least interested, or they would have never gone to the page to begin with. So if you know they want it, focus on closing the deal.
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