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Old 20 December, 2008, 10:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Its quite new but do tell me what you think of the content, ad placement, etc.
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Old 20 December, 2008, 17:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Design: Blue on blue is a bit hard on the eyes.
Content is good. Useful.
Unable to comment on ad placement. Ad's don't load.
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Old 21 December, 2008, 00:49 AM   #3 (permalink)
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White text is difficult to read. You're not monetizin' at all?
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Old 21 December, 2008, 08:20 AM   #4 (permalink)
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As Charles said the text is quite hard to read and a nice in-content ad would go well in the content to make some moolah - other than that it looks fine.
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Old 22 December, 2008, 11:17 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Oh sorry about the ads thing, I activated the plugin and its showing now. About the text readability, how do I improve that?
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About the text readability, how do I improve that?
Change the background and foreground colors to be less similar to each other.
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Yep, that blue background is terribly hard on eyes.
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Oh sorry about the ads thing, I activated the plugin and its showing now.
Ad placement looks fine. My only suggestion would be to add a bit of space between the ads and the text immediately to the right of the ads.

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About the text readability, how do I improve that?
I'd go with lighter colours overall.
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Old 30 December, 2008, 04:17 AM   #9 (permalink)
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The background should be a tad lighter. The page is too dark. Keep the overall structure of the layout,as it is very nice and clean
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