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    GoodkarmaToYou.com

    Let me know what ya think

    of my new funky site

    GoodKarmaToYou.com, well, I have BadKarmaToYou.com too if someone wants to piss me off..

    Thanks and GoodKarmaToYou all.
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    Nice site, clean design at the top

  3. It isn't intuitively obvious what this site does. The average web site visitor has an attention span of about .9 seconds -- you have to sharpen your elevator pitch. In one sentence, what does this site do?

    Does it just send anonymous email? How do you prevent it from being used for spam? How do you prevent it from being used for death threats?

    Why are there two messaging boxes on the front page? One on the left labeled "100% ANONYMOUS & SPAM FREE !" and one on the right labeled "Instant Karma - Simply Fill Up This Form To Send Good Karma Today !"

    In English, there is normally no space before an exclamation mark.
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    Thanks Will for the suggestions.

    I have taken a bit off here and there.

    Bottom line is, "get to the point" what the website is all about.

    Please let me know how I can improve the site.

    Thanks for all the suggestions.
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    You have quite a few spelling and grammatical errors in your site.

    May I suggest;
    At the top of the front page, "Thank you for visiting our website. This website is dedicated to anyone who wishes to share their interest in spreading good messages around the world. We hope we can build a community forum in which everyone can discuss freely their good karma experiences.We want to prompt others to do deeds and send messages that will promote good karma for all involved. Please join our forum and share your thoughts and experiences." should be "Thank you for visiting our website which is for anyone who wishes to share their interest in spreading good messages all around the world. We hope you'll help us build a community forum where everyone will be able to freely discuss their good karma experiences. We want to prompt others to do deeds and send messages that will promote good karma for all involved. Please join our forum and share your thoughts and experiences."

    In the box that reads "Loss of GoodKarma words" that you change this to "Don't know what to say?"

    Above the form, change "Instant Karma - Simply Fill Up This Form To Send Good Karma Today !" to "Instant Karma - Simply Complete This Form And Send Good Karma Today!"

    Under the form, change "We manually approve and quality checks all messages." to "We manually approve and check all messages for quality"

    The about page, change "Sorry, I do not have the billion dollars startup fund, all I have is God’s given “Creativity”. The only fund is from adsense, advertising and T-Shirt." to "Sorry, I do not have a billion dollar startup fund, all I have is my God given “Creativity”. The only funding for this site comes from AdSense, advertising and T-Shirt sales."

    And further down, "We like to hear from you. Any comments or any suggestions to improve the GoodKarmaToYou.com website, please email to: info (at) goodkarmatoyou.com" should be "We'd like to hear from you. If you have any comments or suggestions for improving the GoodKarmaToYou.com website, please email: info (at) goodkarmatoyou.com"

    That's all I've looked at, although I noticed other errors. If you'd like me to correct the remainder just let me know.

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    elbandelero



    thanks Elb...any tips will be helpful.
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    Quote Originally Posted by bullshitwebsites View Post
    elbandelero
    thanks Elb...any tips will be helpful.
    No problem.

    I also notice a missing space in the top navbar between Presentation and Unsubscribe.

    In the FAQ, the answer to 1 has already been corrected in my last post.

    Number 3, change "We like to hear from you. Any comments or any suggestions to improve the GoodKarmaToYou.com website, please email to: info (at)goodkarmatoyou.com" to "We'd like to hear from you. If you have any comments or suggestions for improving GoodKarmaToYou.com website, please email: info (at)goodkarmatoyou.com"

    Number 6, change "Thanks to some "GoodKarmers" who send in their inspirational Good Karma presentations. Please download to view these fantastic Good Karma Motivational Files. The files are virus and spam free. Sit back and Enjoy! If you like to contribute, please send an email to info(at)goodkarmatoyou.com." to "We'd like to thank members who sent us their inspirational Good Karma presentations. These fantastic Good Karma messages are available for download. Sit back and Enjoy! If you'd like to contribute, please send your favorite message to info(at)goodkarmatoyou.com. All files are virus and spam free."

    Presentation page, change "Please download to view these fantastic Good Karma Motivational Files. The files are virus and spam free. Sit back and Enjoy! If you like to contribute, please send an email to info(at)goodkarmatoyou.com." to "Member submitted Good Karma motivational messages are free to download. Sit back and Enjoy! If you'd like to contribute, please send an email to info(at)goodkarmatoyou.com. All files are virus and spam free."

    I won't suggest improvements in your blog posts or member messages, hope this helps.
    Last edited by elbandelero; 5 January, 2009 at 20:51 PM. Reason: small change

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    Thanks Will and the rest of the readers here esp elbandelero for your wonderful suggestions and support.

    If the site cannot meet the .9 seconds, how about 10 seconds?




    Quote Originally Posted by Will.Spencer View Post
    It isn't intuitively obvious what this site does. The average web site visitor has an attention span of about .9 seconds -- you have to sharpen your elevator pitch. In one sentence, what does this site do?

    Does it just send anonymous email? How do you prevent it from being used for spam? How do you prevent it from being used for death threats?

    Why are there two messaging boxes on the front page? One on the left labeled "100% ANONYMOUS & SPAM FREE !" and one on the right labeled "Instant Karma - Simply Fill Up This Form To Send Good Karma Today !"

    In English, there is normally no space before an exclamation mark.
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    So many responses from the public already as I put the www.GoodKarmaToYou.com bumper sticker at the back of my pickup.
    People gives me a thumb up.
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  10. #10
    Quote Originally Posted by bullshitwebsites View Post
    So many responses from the public already as I put the www.GoodKarmaToYou.com bumper sticker at the back of my pickup.
    People gives me a thumb up.
    Very neat marketing technique.

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