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    padilla is offline Unknown Net Builder
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    Help please (a critique needed)

    Hi guys,

    I'm new to the forum and I would like to get my homepage reviewed by seasoned copywriters.

    We have conversion rate of 20%+ on our AdWords campaign (I am relatively good with AdWords) but I would like to hear an expert opinion on what can be improved in terms of copy and call-to-action.

    The page is here: www.webiny.com

    Thanks!

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    Moved to Site Reviews.

    As you're using your first post to place a thread that includes your URL and requests a review, please visit a few other threads asking for the same service, located in this section, and offer your opinion on their site. It might help you get a response by showing you're willing to help in the same manner.
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    Thanks for the tips.
    I first put in copywritting category because I wanted to hear comments for texts.
    and optimization tips.

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    Nice site!Look very pro!Good luck!

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    Quote Originally Posted by tony5885 View Post
    Nice site!Look very pro!Good luck!
    I think so.
    2 years of work on the site, over 1 000 users ...
    I need another opinion ....

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