Need critique on a website design (uncoded)

I created this design for my graphics GCSE project of a local computer store:

http://i27.tinypic.com/283ls.png

Please give me some feedback (it's the first website design i've ever created so i kept it simple)

Will anybody comment on this? i'd like to get some comments on it before i decide to hand it in.

It's decent.
It's good for a first time design.
Very simple and easy to use.
Does it link to a page with all your products?

Thanks,
Noob7

Not bad, work on the design and layout of the site. 6/10 good luck!

Instead of the lines seperating the text, why not make them in boxes or bubbles?

Not a bad idea, why didn't I think of that :P

Yeah, that could work, ill try it out, thanks :)
Any more suggestions are welcome.

I will take another look and let you know :)

It's pretty decent for a first design . There is a LOT of room left for improvments ;)

Any of them you care to share with me? I think ill make anotehr design and work on what others have said, please share what you think i should do to make it better.