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    Suggestions Invited: For landing page

    Please let me know your thoughts on this landing page that is related to software training.

    My client is open to suggestions/criticisms.

    How would you make it better? How about positioning of PayPal button/chat box/testimonials?

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    Somewhere very near the top of the page, I would add an explanation of what QTP is -- or at least what it stands for.

    I like the site. The text needs a bit of cleanup. "4days" should be "4 days", etc... I would also add blank lines between the paragraphs in the "Mode of Training:" section. And do those section headers really need colons?
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    You forgot the big bold red text at the top that says something like

    "Stop wasting your money on books trying to learn Quick Test Pro! Get 4 days of 1 on 1 training and ACTUALLY learn Quick Test Pro.
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    Thanks Will/Aaron. I "ll fix those.

    Anything else that comes to your mind? Most copywriters suggest to have 'call to action' button(eg Paypal) at multiple places? Will it look good in my case?

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